turn on moderation 
  « previous question next question »  
You can go flying or soaring through spacetime, you can go sailing across the blue seas. You can write down some words, maybe chill with some birds - be true to yourself and set yourself free, if you just let yourself, let yourself be...Anything...

CHINA / JUL 11, 2018 6:14 PM EST



Can someone give me feedback on my poem please? I worked really hard on this one. Go easy on me as this is my very first poem. Our Father, which art in heaven, Hallowed be thy Name. Thy Kingdom come. Thy will be done in earth, As it is in heaven. Give us this day our daily bread. And forgive us our trespasses, As we forgive them that trespass against us. And lead us not into temptation, But deliver us from evil. For thine is the kingdom, The power, and the glory, For ever and ever. Amen.

UNITED STATES / JUL 11, 2018 9:25 PM EST
This is a beautiful poem!

UNITED STATES / JUL 11, 2018 8:47 PM EST
Wow

UNITED STATES / JUL 11, 2018 6:57 PM EST
I want to be wealthy.

UNITED STATES / JUL 11, 2018 6:34 PM EST